URL: http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=125896
Author: Boy Pfaff
Genre: Superhero, Action
Schedule: Sporadic
When most people think of “Comics,” they usually think of superheroes, a genre that was born from the boom of Western comics in the 40's. But perhaps as a response to the saturation of the genre and being told that certain works just weren't lucrative enough for traditional publishing (among other reasons), you'd be hard pressed to find superhero webcomics as easily as you would in a comic book store. Accidentals is a series of short superhero comics offering a modern take on the genre, with some impressive inking and linework, but the stories are frustratingly anticlimatic and some of the art needs work.
Writing
There
isn't any overriding story in Accidentals
per se. Rather, it's a set of vignettes in a universe where Para
sapiens (or “ultrapowered” humans) exist throughout history.
There's a story about a normal human in a relationship with an
“ultra”, a story about an alien challenging and killing “Earth's
champions,” a story about a ultrapowered assassin who was involved
in the assassination of JFK, a story about the Allied forces creating
a team of ultras to fight the Nazi's ultra team, a story about a
modern day Medusa, and a story about two kids pretending to have
powers and fighting each other.
Besides
the thematic thread of ultrapowered heroes in this universe, the only
other unifying theme of these stories would be how much it would suck
to be a para sapien. The woman in the first story has a superhero
fetish (though paraphilia
is already a thing) and puts
herself in danger just to see an ultrapowered fight (and her
ultra boyfriend ditches her). The supers fighting Ares get either
killed
or maimed.
Despite Blindspot's powers to be unseen, the fact that other
supers exist who
provide protection to targets and new
recording technology can catch him on tape yields his advantages
useless. The modern Medusa man accidentally kills
his family and commits
suicide out of grief. With the exception of the boys in the
latest
story,
the comic doesn't revel in the over-the-top multi-page fight scenes.
The author usually has the fights
in progress, cut
just before they take place, or showing just how horrifying it
would be to actually witness
a fight, wisely criticizing the genre's excesses while not
indulging in them itself.
My
only problem is how these vignettes are so frustratingly short. I
guess it could be considered a complement, that the only problem is
that I'm left wanting more, though I wouldn't consider it one.
Satires of superhero comics has been done for decades, and the
stories in the comic are so short, that there is little room to
really expand upon any of the commentary made. It kills any real
potential for character development, and you're left wondering why
any of the stories matter if they're never mentioned or shown
affecting the universe in any significant way at all. If para
sapiens played key roles in world history such as fighting in WWII or
assassinating a president, I'm sure that we'd see that the world
would be significantly different than it is now. While some stories
seem purposely made to end
anticlimactically, others seem like the author
wanted to move on to something else. Either way, I'd like to see
some longer works in the future.
The
comic is a full page inked, colored, and shaded comic (with the
exception of Blindspot,
which is pure black and white) most likely all done digitally. The
inking is competently done, capturing shadows,
fine
details, and a feeling
of motion with a variety of stroke widths and an eye for detail.
Detailed inking becomes the comics' flaw though; the author has a
tendency to put a little too much detail into the faces, making them
look ugly, especially with women and children (1,
2,
3,
4,
5).
While everyone has nasolabial
folds or “laugh lines,” drawing them makes people look older,
which probably wasn't what the author intended.
The
colors are a bit flat, especially in contrast to the amount of detail
put into the inking of the comic (1,
2,
3,
4).
There's not a lot of shading, and when it is put in, the darker
color isn't that much darker than the flat color, giving a feeling of
a lack of depth and bland lighting. It has a bizarre effect. If the
art was heavily stylized, I probably wouldn't mind the colors being
flat and the contrast being dull. But seeing how much work was put
into the inking and drawing makes the coloring feel like an
afterthought, making me wonder if it should even be there at all.
That's probably why I like “Blindshot” the best, because the
restriction to pure black and white results in more focus on building
depth and contrast to build the mood of the comic.
Accidentals
is a realistic take on the superhero genre with some strong lineart
and some interesting ideas. Unfortunately, a satirical take on the
genre has been done before and with its short vignettes that
sometimes cut off right when the story gets interesting, the
commentary on the genre is shallow at best. But I see a lot of
potential in the author and would love to see him do something
longer.
Thank you, Roby, for reviewing my webcomic Accidentals.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading it very much.
One point I must make: the shortness of the stories is due to my aim to introduce many ultras in a short period of time. Hence the current tale Rock Paper Scissors, which isn't much of story, but serves this purpose effectively.
Thanks again, and I do hope your still reading my work.
Boy Phaff
I can understand showing a wide variety of ultras to create a sense of a broader history of ultras throughout the world you're establishing, though the approach paradoxically feels shallower than just focusing on a small ensemble since we barely get to know them before moving on to another group.
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